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I was thinking you make me feel things that I couldn't buy with a million bucks.
You crash my train of thought with
"Let's never talk about this or bring it up again."
"Okay. I agree."
I cant figure out what lies even mean anymore.
All I know is my eyes sting and my throat isn't working very well.
I manage a small wave and walk away as fast as I can without actually
               b r e a k i n g  i n t o  a  r u n .
Tonight I'll take pills and fall asleep with the t.v. on.
You called after me "Darling, we'll be seeing eachother soon."
I love you. And I'll never look you in the eyes again.
                       I woke up on the upstairs floor.
                            And took the elevator to the clouds.
              Your sky blue eyes dont seem so deep up here.
                   as they did when we were at the bottom of
                              the ocean and every breath
                                   I dragged in made
                                       my lungs die
                                            a little
                                          f a s t e r .


                That's how deep the ocean is.
                That's how deep your eyes are.
                That's how deep we were.
(You told me breathing was a bad habit. So I kicked it.)

        And you pulled me out of the sky faster than a plane crash.
"Anything broken?"
"No. No broken bones. But my heart..."
Well, I guess that's old news.
You pulled me from the wreck and said
"Angel, you'll never make the papers."
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~thefurrez Apr 22, 2007  Student Writer
"You pulled me from the wreck and said
"Angel, you'll never make the papers." "

brilliant.

+fav

-furz
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
thank you so much

:heart:
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:iconsikarito63:
if I say anything, then it still won't be enough praise! but, I love this/all of your poetry
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:iconsymphonyofmadness:

I woke up on the upstairs floor.
And took the elevator to the clouds.
Your sky blue eyes dont seem so deep up here.

You pulled me from the wreck and said
"Angel, you'll never make the papers."


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*+stalkerfavs everything in your plethora of a gallery*

Dang. I wish you could get prints of poetry and prose.
I love this/you. Kthnxbai :heart:
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
:heart:
:heart:

wowza, thanks a ton
I love you too
:]
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:iconturtbub:
love it, love it, couldn't love it more. favorite.
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:iconsilverangel38:
The effect you create with your poetry and especially because of the way you play with the sizes and patterns of the words is so unbelievably great!!! :+fav:
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:icontherapeutic--smile:
this is perfect.
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