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Look across the room.
I'm smiling,you're laughing.
But we're dying to know what we're about.

We're biting lips for different reasons
               nervous as hell, pain, turn ons...


You're dropping kisses on my lips and saying "I'll see you everyday,right?"
             I fall a step back and say "No... we can't."

If I'm ruining this for you, what do you think its doing for me?

                                         We can't work it out
                                         so go away
                                         before I get caught like butterflies stuck dying in a jar.    
                                         without air for the whole summer, love.          
                                                                   Goodbye.

A summer apart.
This is what they call torture, sweetheart.
A summer apart.
my goddam broken heart.

Someone tell me what's going on.
            Are boys like you required to say "I love you"
            because I'm okay with honesty.</b>
I'm not okay with you spitting lines that only mean something to me.
because I want to believe so badly.

you forgot to catch your little butterfly and put oxygen back in her veins.
Told you she'd die.
xox
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:iconpincushionqueen2:
pincushionqueen2 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2006
wow
this piece is so beautiful
great job
you're a wonderufl writer
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2006  Student Artist
:blush:thank you.
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pincushionqueen2 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2006
no problem
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xxxfearofperfectionx Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2005
:( i love you
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005  Student Artist
well, I'm glad you love me, but why the sad face?

:heart:
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AellaWind Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2005
oh
my
god

I LOVE
ALL
YOUR POEMS!!

You're better than me!! *envies you*
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2005  Student Artist
no way! you're amazing! :nod:
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whorer-movie Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005
WAAAAAAAAH I love the end. Holy hell.
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2005  Student Artist
Thankyou!=D
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Just-Jo Featured By Owner May 23, 2005
whoa really love this one!! really! Keep up the good work
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 24, 2005  Student Artist
Thank you!=D
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pleasekillthedrama Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
amazing, you have wonderful talent. <33
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 22, 2005  Student Artist
Thank you!!
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SoundsOfSorrow Featured By Owner May 20, 2005   Writer
tis cute... i'd take out the tacky movie part though :kiss:
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:iconxparis-in-flames:
xparis-in-flames Featured By Owner May 18, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
:jawdrop: uhh.... favourite.
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 20, 2005  Student Artist
thank you tori!!=D
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xparis-in-flames Featured By Owner May 20, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem... your shit is so cool
im jealous :)
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turbopat Featured By Owner May 17, 2005   Writer
this is really good, i like the reacurring line about the butterfly.

Oh, you forgot to catch your little butterfly and put oxygen back in her veins. Told you she'd die

awsome ending, great work.
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 17, 2005  Student Artist
Thank you so much!:glomp:
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:iconfragilemacabre:
fragilemacabre Featured By Owner May 16, 2005
Wow.
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 16, 2005  Student Artist
thank you for the :+fav:!!
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haven-spear Featured By Owner May 15, 2005
AHA!! YOU CAN RYHME!!

:giggle: I can't believe you've never been kissed, you're so romantic :XD:
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 16, 2005  Student Artist
heh... I don't really like when I rhyme..I make it sound too corny... but thanks!!
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner May 15, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
this fits together so well....feels like this poem was meant for me... like you knew my thoughts. definately a fav!
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 15, 2005  Student Artist
thanks hannah!!
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silentscreams357 Featured By Owner May 15, 2005   Photographer
i like it alot. everything about it kicks my ass.. =)
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 15, 2005  Student Artist
lmao...Thanks!=D
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silentscreams357 Featured By Owner May 15, 2005   Photographer
YEP!!! ^-^
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ellecrumpets Featured By Owner May 15, 2005
nice poem. well written. good idea
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 16, 2005  Student Artist
thanks!!=D
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Rai-Starstreak Featured By Owner May 15, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it =)
Not sure what, but something about it just catches my interest
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner May 15, 2005  Student Artist
Thank you so much for the :+fav:!!
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