literature

FactoriesAndFailures

Deviation Actions

Published: Sep 10, 2006

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Literature Text

^{"Yes,"

she said.
"you make life beautiful
and loving you is living it in the best way,
it's timeless."
His smile radiates complete happiness as he pulls her into his arms.
"It's like it's always been like this, will be this way forever,"
he breathes in her hair.

They were classic.

Then he met Heroine.
The type that doesn't save people
and he as good as yelled
"Forever is over."

Days, weeks, months, passed and she stayed awake for lonely nights.
One day at dinner she attempted a watery smile
                  [to wash out a dry conversation]
       "Hey boy, I dance on water."
His face remained calm as he muttered
                     "Hey girlie, I swim in skirts"

Suddenly, she stood up and crossed the room in one quick move.
She opened the curtains to a spacious meadow where the ground was wet and the sky hung low with dark clouds.
He walked past her cautiously and pressed his face against the glass to see a woman standing on a small ladder.

                            "Her name is Rainy."

He turned his head, but the girl who used to be his everything was gone.
            [She finally fell asleep]

He turned back to the meadow and the glass fell away.
He stepped through, drawn to the woman called Rainy.
As he approached her, he saw a basket full of colorful bows that were soaked through.

"I'm hanging the bows on this clothesline.
Grab a pin and wait in line,
they need to dry."
Her back was still facing him.

"But if they dry, they won't be rainbows anymore,"
he replied.

"No. When they start to dry I make it rain again."

He stares at her, confused.   "Isn't that pointless?"
Finally, she turns and looks directly at him, her blue gaze burning through him.
"Haven't you ever seen someone work for something and in the end, they're the one that ruins everything?
I make these people;
I made you."

"No!" he whispers as he backs up.
He turns around and rushes through the curtains,
back into his own world.

He goes for a drive with bright blue skies
and finds her lying on a park bench.
She stares up at him and whispers
"We were in love at one time."

He grabs her hand and pulls her to a standing position.
"We're still in love!" he screams.
"What're you talking about? We're still in love!"

It's too late, he realizes:
Rainy's eyes are shining out of her face.
She shakes her head slowly
as she falls back to the earth
and her lips form the word

"No."}

^{'gin, my style.

EEEEHHHH,

I wrote this really poorly.

lemme put it this way..

the way I think of it is 103494954646464 times more beautiful than how i wrote it.

I doubt you can even picture it the same way I did.

descrip. :

boy meets girl meets fall in total love.

he changes. he goes for things that ruin lives.

girl stays with him. even though he goes to other girls&drugs.etc.

one day she pushes him into a rainy world where a lady opens his eyes a little too late.

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